Avoid Nominalization
try not to use nouns
Avoid
- abstraction nouns (-ence, -tion …etc)
- emtpy verb (make, cause, do)
- emtpy nonus (there )
Let the verb do the works
Example:
The police conducted an investigation(X) into the matter => The police investigated into the matter
Tips: DAR
- Diagnose
- Analyize
- Rewrite